The love story of Arjun

[Babunuvbtechah]

3 minutes ago, Seekinghelp said:

Maybe it's my choice of storytelling. Taking it or leaving it is left to the readers. 

These readers are not taking it ... chustunar ga no views at all ... views count shows how interest the story is 

[tarunbhaskar]

e daridrapu story enti arjun reddy spoof a

chivarki db lo kuda movies ni copy kodatamena

buddileni edavalara

[Seekinghelp]

3 minutes ago, Babunuvbtechah said:

These readers are not taking it ... chustunar ga no views at all ... views count shows how interest the story is 

That is fine bro. I usually do not write in this genre anduke narration sucks emo. 

[Seekinghelp]

1 minute ago, tarunbhaskar said:

e daridrapu story enti arjun reddy spoof a

chivarki db lo kuda movies ni copy kodatamena

buddileni edavalara

why abusing man? I clearly mentioned that all the incidents are real. Why would I need to fake? 

[Babunuvbtechah]

1 minute ago, Seekinghelp said:

That is fine bro. I usually do not write in this genre anduke narration sucks emo. 

So which genre are you expert in 😉

adhe try karo... wait a min @Khan_Dada_ is that you ?? 

[Amy99]

3 minutes ago, Seekinghelp said:

That is fine bro. I usually do not write in this genre anduke narration sucks emo. 

no ,your narration is good! i dint read all of your posts though. 

manchi views unnay, ante ppl are visiting this thread. dont pay much attention to  negative criticism.  

[Seekinghelp]

3 minutes ago, Babunuvbtechah said:

So which genre are you expert in 😉

adhe try karo... wait a min @Khan_Dada_ is that you ?? 

oh, that would make you feel like banging your head against the wall.. Coz I used to write political articles on online forums long back. 

I don't know who Khan dada is

 

[NaChavNenuChasta]

I liked it ..u continue

[Seekinghelp]

3 minutes ago, Amy99 said:

no ,your narration is good! i dint read all of your posts though. 

manchi views unnay, ante ppl are visiting this thread. dont pay much attention to  negative criticism.  

Thank you Amy

It will take a couple of more days to complete this phase of my friend's story. I was inspired by a break-up story that I read last week on this DB. So thought to share this story of mine

[tarunbhaskar]

2 hours ago, AnthegaAnthega said:

Good job for writing this story. You have good future as writer. I read only half felt like movie story.

You have good writing skills , try to write some stories for news papers or magazines. 

 

e story ni movie teste utter flop avtundi ra

tasteless fellow

[samaja_varagamana]

thread talk enti hit ah avg ah flop ah

adi chepthe will start reading thread...

@TOM_BHAYYA mana valu kaka pothe chepamantunadu

[Amy99]

2 minutes ago, Seekinghelp said:

Thank you Amy

It will take a couple of more days to complete this phase of my friend's story. I was inspired by a break-up story that I read last week on this DB. So thought to share this story of mine

: )

[Amy99]

1 minute ago, samaja_varagamana said:

thread talk enti hit ah avg ah flop ah

adi chepthe will start reading thread...

@TOM_BHAYYA mana valu kaka pothe chepamantunadu

me vaalle anta chadhuvu.

[Seekinghelp]

2 minutes ago, samaja_varagamana said:

thread talk enti hit ah avg ah flop ah

adi chepthe will start reading thread...

@TOM_BHAYYA mana valu kaka pothe chepamantunadu

Inka story avvaledu. Final verdict not out yet bhayya. Aipoyaaka tag chestha. 

me vaalu ante?

 

[tarunbhaskar]

3 minutes ago, samaja_varagamana said:

thread talk enti hit ah avg ah flop ah

adi chepthe will start reading thread...

@TOM_BHAYYA mana valu kaka pothe chepamantunadu

utter flop story arjun teddy movie ni dempesadu