CharyGari Rachana....

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Athaniki sumaru nalabhai samvatsaralu vuntayi,Yeppudu oka foto jebu lo pettkuntadu,
Adi evarido ento yevariki teliyadu.Kani prathi samvathsaram sarigga ee roju antey,
August yenimidava tariku aa railway station ki Vastadu.Vochina prathisari chala digaalu ga yedo
Pogottukunavadila vuntadu Sayantram daka ala aa bench meeda kurchuni vellipothadu.
Ila gatha 20 samvathsarala nundi jaruguthundi…..Athanu yevaro yekada vuntado yenduku vasthado  yevarki Teliyadu.

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Avi athanu engineering chivari samvatsaram
Modalainapati rojulu yepatilagane
Secunderabad station ki vachi
Tana snehithulatho kalasi kaburulu
Cheppukuntunadu….“Mahabubnagar ki vellavalasina tungabadhra
Express padhava number platform nundi bayaluderatanki
Sidham ga vundi” anna announcement toh andaru vachi train ekkaru appudu sumaru ga udayam 7-50 kavasthundi


train  lo ekkaka kitiki pakkana chotu kosam okatanu snekhithulatoh  debbaladuthunnadu  chinna pilaldilaga !!  vella alikidiki akkadae kitiki  pakakana kurchuni vollo bag , bag paina tala petti padukunna oka ammayi  lechindi . lechi kastha atuga jarigindhi , veeriki kurcho daniki place  offer chesinattu ga .


appude lechina aa ammayi  ventrukalu    nallaga vothhuga kaaru cheekatiki polinattu ga unnayi , pedda kallu  andamaina mukku chinni chini yerrati pedalu ammayi lakshanam ga undi,  entho andam ga kuda undhi. tanu aa abbayini modatichupulone  aakarshincindi . venakalanundi " orey shashank " ani evaro pilavatam tho  venakalaki tirgi chusadu aa abbayi " naaku kuda place unchu " ani book  visiresadu tana friend okadu, danni pattukoni chakkaga aa ammayi pakkane  kurchunnadu shahank.


koddi sepatiki malakpet railway station    vochhindi akkada baaga rush ga untadatm toh shashank valla friends  antha digi venakala daba loki velli poyaru kani shashank matram akkade  kurchoni aa ammayi toh edo matladataniki prayathnisthunadu . adi  telusukunna aa ammayi sannaga tanalo tane navvukoni, "meeru yekkadiki  velthunnaru " ani adigindhi . munduga vachhina aa prashna ki koncham  tadabadi analochitaham ga ne "mahabubnagar " annadu .


tanu  inko maata matlade lope ,madhyalo kaliginchukoni "mimmalni yeppudu  chudaldhu ee train lo ye college" ani adigadu , nenu train lo raanu bus  lo ne velthanu, train lo chala takkuve prayanam cheyyatam annadhi.  inthaki college..... ani prashna inka purthi kuda kakunda ne "kottam  tulasi reddy college " ani cheppindhi . shashank ki aa college lo chala  mandhi friends unnaru ala valla gurinchi matladukuntu akkade kurchundi  poyadu.

ala ardhaganta gadichindi train ee loga city limits daati  poyindhi , ala ala matladukuntu matladukuntu shashank ki aa ammayi peru  adagaledhu ani gurtochhindi , intha sepu matladesaka peru elaga  adagatam ani anukuntu "inthaki mee mottam peru enti" ani adigadu ,  appudu aa ammayi ayyo mee peru adagatame marachipoyanu mee peru enti ani  adigindhi "shashank reddy ...mari mee peru ani annadu. naa peru sirisha  friends andaru "siri" antaru annadhi . ok nenu kuda siri ane pilusthanu  sarena antu leni chanuvu teesukui aa ammayi ki deggara ga kurchuni edo  chepatam modalu pettadu shashank, siri asalu abbayilanu haddulu  daatanivvadu , alantidhi shashank mataram ka pravaham la tanani  chuttesthunna siri ki kopam raavatam ledhu tanu kuda shashank ki deggara  ga kurchoni tanu cheppe maatalu vintundhi .


shashank  matladuthunte evaraina ala vintu undalsindhe , athanki chuttu jarige  visheyala gurinchi unna samacharam alantidhi.ye vishayam paina aina  anargalam ga matladatam lo tanaki tane saati. ila koddi sepu gadchaka  shadnagar vochhindi . akkada samosalu ante shashank ki chala ishtam  vaati kosam train digi tirigi vachhesariki siri talupu deggara nilabadi  undhi ,venakala chusthey iddaru musali vallu vella place lo kurchunnaru  vaarini lepatam ishtam leka shashank koncham sepu ala talupu deggare  nilchundam ani siri toh annadu .

anthaku munde aa abhiprayaniki  vachhina siri matram navvukoni sare babu nee ishtam annadi. iddaru velli  door pakkane nilchunnaru , shashank tana style lo "challani vatavaranam  chuttu kondalu pachhani pantalu chethilo vedi vedi samosalu aha intha  kanna em kaavali ee yedava jeevithaniki" cheppu annadu kavithwam  chepthunattu ,siri "kontega navvuthu ivvi thinesaka taagataniki nellu"  annadi iddaru navvukunnaru . ala iddaru samosalu thintu undaga okkasari  ga siri ki gonthulo edo addu padinattu ga anipinchi dagguthunte ekkada  nundo nellu teesukochhi "mee valle ninnu gurthu chesukuntunaru anukunta "  annadu shashank .  ademledu gonthulo edo addupadindhi anthe annadhi  siri,adenti  mee vallu ninnu gurthu chesukoni undachhu ga annadu thanane  chusthu . "maa amma nanna naa chinappude chanipoyaru "  koddi shashank  notlo mata ledu  tarvatha shashank inka shock nunchi  terukokunda ne "  unna okka bamma kuda mona selavullo chanipoyndhi " ani cheppindhi siri.


naaku  andari laga mavayyalu ,babilu yevaru leru . maa amma ki kani nanna ki  kani todabuttina vallu evaru leru  nenu okkadanne naaku evaru leru . ee  maata vinagane shashank ki kallalo nellu tirigayi kani siri kallalo  matram etuvanti bhayam ledhu naa annavallu leru ane badha tappa  jeevtiham meeda etuvanti digulu ledu . vinatanike intha kashtam ga undhi  naaku ,nuvvu ela intha dhairyam ga vntunnavo naaku ardham kaavatam  ledhu annadu shashank. indulo bhayapadataniki emundhi naa kallameeda  nenu nenu niluchune chaduvu naaku undhi elago naaku ee term fees okkate  kattali adi nenu maa chairman toh matladanu vallu chusukuntam annaru  inka nenu naa brathuku brathakagalanu ane nammakam naaku undhi.
ee  maatalu vinna shashank ki siri meeda appati varaku unna manchi  abhiprayam inka ekkuva ayyindhi . kani evaru leru anna oka maata matram  shashank ni chala kudipesindhi .



iddariki okarante  okariki manchi abhiprayam vochhindi, appudu siri " intha china time lo  nenu inthaga evarinto matladaledhu thank you for everything "anna  maatalaki inka chala deggarayyadane feeling vachhindi shashank ki . ade  chanuvu toh thana ni adigadu ippudu velli ekkada untav gadwal lo ani??  hostel address ivvamani adiginattu ga adigadu , tana luggage antha  vethiki paper dorakaka povatam toh tana foto okati teesi venukala edo  raasi ichhindi . aa foto chusthu elagaina siri mood change cheyyali ani  anukunna shashank " nuvvu chaala andam ga unnav" ee fotolo antu venakala  chudakunda edo matalllo petti mothhaniki aa foto venakala em raasundho  chudakunda ne jebulo pettesukunnadu  kani siri kallanni aa foto meeda ne  unnayi .

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oka  kshanam lo nenu oka jeevithanne pogottukunnanu ... ani rasunna tana  dairy lo raasukunna page ni chusthu badha paddadu shashank , moodu  gantala prayanam lo athadu oka jeevithaniki saripada gnapakalani tanalo  badra parachukunnadu anna sangathi appatiki inka tanaki teliyadu .
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mahabubnagar  ki inka ganta prayanam vundanaga iddari manasulo edo alajadi edo  telyani badha , idari mohala meeda spashtam ga telusthundi . ento  uthsaham ga unna iddaru okkasariga ghambeeram ga maaripoyaru . lo lo  pala alochanala pravahalu paaruthunna bayataki emi lenattu ga nishabdham  ga undi poyaru.


naaku udyogam ledhu , thindi ki battalake  kakunda aakariki cinemalaki saradalaki kuda okari meeda adhara padi  brathuku thunnanu nenu  ilanti samayam lo tanani nenu naatho rammanatam  entha varaku samanjasam ??? idi ila unte naaku aadhara padataniki  tallidandrulu ayna unnaru , ye aadaram leni oka ammayi adi inka  chaduvukune vayasulo ela brathakagaladu ?? anni unna ammayilake rakshana  leni ee rojullo oka ontari ammayi ni ila vodileyyatam ante asalu  nachhaledhu shashank ki .

ila aalochanala pravaham agakunda ne  jadcharla eppudu vachhindo kuda teliyaledhu , inko padihenu nimushalu  maha antey paathika nimushalu aa tarvatha mahabubnagar raane vasthundi  siri ni vadili vellataniki asalu manasu raavatam ledhu shashank ki .  kani em chesedhi ? tanatoh digi ramanni adagaledu ala ani tana toh  kalasi vellanu ledu ? em cheyyalo tochatam ledhu shashank ki , antha  challani vatavaranam lo kuda chemataki tadisipothunnadu shashank .  pakkane unna siri kalla loni mooga saigalu shashank ni cheratam ledhu .  noru terachi adagaleni paristhithi sirisha dhi , emanukuntado anna  chinna bhayam oka pakkana tanani matladanivvatam ledu.

em  adagalanna teliyani mohamatam okati , em cheyalo kuda teliyani ayomayam  iddarilo. mahabubnagar railway station kanuchupu meralo kanipisthundi  iddariki gunde vegam perigindhi. ayna iddaru nischeshtulayyi okarini  okaru chusukuntu nilabadi poyaru. ippatiki kuda digalo oddo anna  sandighdham lo ne unnadu shashank . nannu neetho teesukupo ani sirisha  kallu aduguthune unnayi kani aa avedana shashak ki teliyatam ledhu .  railu digina shashank venakki tirigi sirishani chudaleka pothunnadu tadi  aarani kallatoh . podibaarina gothu tho tanaki veedukolu palaka lenu  ani telusu kabatti .

okasari venakaliki tirigithey amantham  shashank ni kavalinchesukoni akkade tanatoh digi povali ani yentho  aasaga eduruschusthundi sirisha , railu bayaluderuthundi melliga vegam  punjukuntunna kodhi iddari manasulu baruvekkuthunnayi . manasuloni badha  kallalo nundi bayataki kannellu ga vosthundi sirisha ki , okka sari  "shashi" ani arichindhi kani dukham toh nindina aa gonthu nundi mata  bayataki raaledhu , atu shashank emo ippudu kakapothey inkeppatiki siri  ni cherukolenu ani gattiga nirnayinchukuni venakki tirigi parugethha  boyadu , inthalo railu vegam mandaginchindi , evaro nadusthunna railu  nundi kinda paddaru " ani arupulu vinipinchayi .

talaki pedda  debba taakatam tho chala raktham poyindhi, aa manishi spruha lo ledhu.  dooram ga unna shashank parigethhu kochhadu , oka kshnam gunde  kottukovatam aagipoyindhi , medadu moddhu baripoyindhi , choosthu  nilabadi poyadu , ontlo chalanam raavatam ledhu, kalla nundi nellu  kaaruthunnayi , niluchunna chotane sthambinchi poyadu . dukkham lo  athaniki em ardham kavatamledhu . aa ammayini teesukochhi oka cement  bench paina padukobetti ambulance ki fone cheyyataniki vellaru kondaru .  chuttujanam , shahsank vollo tala pettukoni haiga nidra pothunattu ga  padi unna sirisha. andaru unna okkaru kuda emi cheyyaleni nissahaya  sthithi. ilanti sandarbham pagavallaki kuda raakudadu anukuntunnaru  chuttu janalu . shashank matram ala siri tala tana vollo pettukoni  chusthu undi poyadu ......


moodu gantalu gadichayi, oka car  vochhi aagindhi 5-6 ammayilu andulo nundi bayataki digaru andari  mohalameeda andolana. dooram ga operation theatre deggara doctorlu "emi  cheyyalemu bleeding chala ekkuva ga undhi , chevulanundi kuda raktham  pothundi ma chethullo em ledhu" anesaru . kondaru ammayilu edusthunnaru ,  vere vallu vallaki dhairyam chepthunnaru kani shashank matram operation  theatre door deggara kurchuni  ala shunyam loki chusthu undi poyadu  .vollanta raktham marakalu , jebulo siri ichhina foto.

akkadaki  vochhina ammayillo oka ammayi  , shashank deggara ki vachhi "shashank  ante... " ame matlade lope kaliginchukoni nene annattu tala oopadu  shashank .
oka sari ila raa .....
aa ammayi shashi ni siri luggage deggara ki teesukoni poyindi .

ippudu  siri chivari gadiyallo undhi kaneesam ippudu ayna tanu ninnu enthaga  preminchindo neeku teliyali antu siri luggage nundi oka dairy ni  bayataki teesindhi . andulo ni prathi page lo okkasari ayyina shashank  peru raasi undhi . tanani siri preminchatam enti?? kalisi inka oka roju  ayna kaaledhu?? ani ade maata ramya ni adagaboyadu shashank , kani aa  ammayi ramya  shashank ni aapi mottamodati sari shashank ni sirisha  ekkada chusindo ela chusindo dairy lo oka page open chesi chupinchindi.

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avvi  srisha valla college lo "technical fest" jaruguthunna rojulu. sumaru ga  7-8 college la nundi students vachharu aa function ki andulo shashank  kuda unadu. akkada jarigina debate lo "street children,orphans,western  influence on indian youth " ane topics meeda ento chakkaga matladi  andarini meppinchina shashank ki modati bahumati ga 5000/- vochhindi. aa  debate lo matladina matalu sirisha ki shashank ante oka manchu  abhiprayam kaliginchayi. ala andaru students ochhina prize money tho  party chesukuntunte shashank matram akkade unna oka chinna anaada  sharanalayam lo ni pilla laki panchi pettadu . akkade sirisha ki  shashank ante ishtam modalayyindhi . ala ala sirisha ki shashank  gurinchi telisina prathi vishayam tana loni prema ni inka inka penchayi .  adi siri ni entha ga prabhavitham chesindhi ante tanaki evaru  lekapoyina brathakataniki oka margam chupinche dhairyam ichindi.

eppudu  tana friends ki " naa shashi...ilaga " "naa shashi ...alaga " ani  cheppukunedhi ani telisi kallalo anta sepu aagina kannellu kindaki  jaarayi shashank ki . tanaki teliyakunda teesina fotlu , tanu trian lo  pogottukunna vasthuvulu , tanaki ishtamaina paatala CD lu, okata renda  siri luggage mottam vaati tho ne nindi poyindhi . tanani oka ammayi  inthaga ishtapduthundi ane nijanni nammaleka poyadu . podunna nundi  tanatho unna ammayine alanti sthithi lo chusinanduku antha ga badha  padda shashank ki aa ammayi tanani intha ga premisthundi ani  telusukogane gunde pagilinantha pani ayyindhi. elagaina tanani  kapadamani doctorlani vedukunnadu. doctorlu emi cheyyaleka poyaru "we  are  , tanu inka ee lokam lo ledhu" ani cheppi tana bujam meeda  cheyyi vesi oka nitturpu vidichi vellipoyaru. gunde pagile la edusthunna  shashank ni chusthunte  chuttu pakkala vaariki kuda kallu chemmagillayi  .......

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kallu  terichi chusthey ade railway station , ade cement benchlu anni unnayi  kani tanu ledhu. ade chedu gnapakam tanani ventaduthundi ....... aa  sangatana jarigi sumaru ga 20 samvatsaralu daatina inka ninna monna ne  jariginattu ga undhi shashank ki .
tana deggara unna siri modati, chivari gnapakam aina siri foto ni tippi chusadu
shashi

"Naa Kallu Ninnu Chusthune Vunna,
Naa Manasu Ninnu Pilusthune Vunna,
Noru Vippi Na Prema Neeku Cheppalekunna,
Ee Vidhe Manalni Vidadeesthundi Anukunna.Kani
Naa Piriki Thanam Toh Nene Ninnu Dooram Chesukuntunna.."

ani raasi undhi akkada

tanani preminchina ammayi kaneesam tana loni premani
vyaktha  parachaleka povatanni jeerninchukolekapoyina shashi ippatiki kuda inko  ammayini shirisha sthanam lo vuhinchukovataniki ishtapadatam ledhu.

ee 20 samvatsarala sudeerga prayanam yeppatiki aaguthundo yela aaguthundo kuda


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