"i Wish I Could Say" - Naa Rendo Attempt At Poetry- Feedback Again Pls

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I Wish I Could Say everything to you, the struggle and pain I was going through, but I can't express it in simple words nor with any sort of expressions, it is not that easy for me. For the past few days, I was acting as If I am doing good, but sincerely I am not.
Suffering Thoughts, Hard Hitting truth, Sleepless nights, Great Memories, Pacifying Talk, Golden words, Moments of Extreme Sadness and Never ending Feelings have turned against me at once and I am in a deep relentless struggle to face them all alone at a time
I wish I could say all this to you but deep within I know that you wouldn't understanding anything...........
I Wish you could.

[Ruler4Dmasses]

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I Wish I Could Say everything to you, the struggle and pain I was going through, but I can't express it in simple words nor with any sort of expressions, it is not that easy for me. For the past few days, I was acting as If I am doing good, but sincerely I am not.
Suffering Thoughts, Hard Hitting truth, Sleepless nights, Great Memories, Pacifying Talk, Golden words, Moments of Extreme Sadness and Never ending Feelings have turned against me at once and I am in a deep relentless struggle to face them all alone at a time
I wish I could say all this to you but deep within I know that you wouldn't understanding anything...........
I Wish you could.
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Baaa.. I can empathize ur feelings to an extent...okkadive lolopala stcuk avvaku baaa[img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ninnujo4.gif?1290449750[/img]
if u open it out... simple aina comflex aina .. seffu baa...common baa.. Edho feel vundhi .. seppalanukuntunnaav.. chepthe better avthaav.. [img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/trisha_blush.gif?1290228943[/img]

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Baaa.. I can empathize ur feelings to an extent...okkadive lolopala stcuk avvaku baaa[img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ninnujo4.gif?1290449750[/img]
if u open it out... simple aina comflex aina .. seffu baa...common baa.. Edho feel vundhi .. seppalanukuntunnaav.. chepthe better avthaav.. [img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/trisha_blush.gif?1290228943[/img]
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Poetry ki Personal Life ki sambandham ledu baa..........ala feel ayyi rayadam start chesa

[Ruler4Dmasses]

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Poetry ki Personal Life ki sambandham ledu baa..........ala feel ayyi rayadam start chesa
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Nenu empathize aiindhi kooda personal life kaadhu baa....I defnitely agreee personal life ki poetry ki sambandam ledhu..
but personal life lo sandarbaanusaaram .. itharathraa kaarakaala valla poetry modulate avvuddhi from each person..
Nuvvu poetry septhaavemo ani nenu interested baa.. naaku baa interest ... old/new.. western.. mana indian thoughts mix esi..edho naaku siraakesinappudo ..haffie avalannappudu raasesi releax avthaa...

so alaa raase vallante baa istham... raastha raastha mundukelthe improve cheskodaaniki aaskaaram vuntundani .. i think baa...

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Nenu empathize aiindhi kooda personal life kaadhu baa....I defnitely agreee personal life ki poetry ki sambandam ledhu..
but personal life lo sandarbaanusaaram .. itharathraa kaarakaala valla poetry modulate avvuddhi from each person..
Nuvvu poetry septhaavemo ani nenu interested baa.. naaku baa interest ... old/new.. western.. mana indian thoughts mix esi..edho naaku siraakesinappudo ..haffie avalannappudu raasesi releax avthaa...

so alaa raase vallante baa istham... raastha raastha mundukelthe improve cheskodaaniki aaskaaram vuntundani .. i think baa...
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I agree with you baa, i would seriously take your advice for good.

Migithavallu kooda kastha aadaristhe choodhamu ani wait chesthunna, entha sepu ammayi abbayi lo em qualities choostharu, bore kofuthundi ilanti postlu eh thappa migithavati meeda interest pettatledu evaru...........

[Hummer]

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Nachaleda baa............

[Market Mastaan]

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Nachaleda baa............
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nee enki lo na tenki..inkaa ardam kaaledaa. meeru epatikaina goppa kavulu avtharu ani aa gif

[Ruler4Dmasses]

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I agree with you baa, i would seriously take your advice for good.

Migithavallu kooda kastha aadaristhe choodhamu ani wait chesthunna, entha sepu ammayi abbayi lo em qualities choostharu, bore kofuthundi ilanti postlu eh thappa migithavati meeda interest pettatledu evaru...........
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Poetry..nuvvu raaseyy anthe..
saalamaniki nacchadhu ani naaku thelsule baa...
nacchalsina avasaram kooda ledhu.. valla istaall vallavi..
Their lack of interest to such posts should stop us baaa..
okkodidhiokko flow ...
okadu jokelu.. inkodlu counterlu..
okadu dedications .. inkodu emotionsu
okallu cheering.. inkodu flirting..
nuvvu raasey baa.. raayalsindhe anthe,,[img]http://gifs.gifbin.com/082010/1281970997_wake-up-call.gif[/img]

[Hummer]

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nee enki lo na tenki..inkaa ardam kaaledaa. meeru epatikaina goppa kavulu avtharu ani aa gif
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Poetry..nuvvu raaseyy anthe..
saalamaniki nacchadhu ani naaku thelsule baa...
nacchalsina avasaram kooda ledhu.. valla istaall vallavi..
Their lack of interest to such posts should stop us baaa..
okkodidhiokko flow ...
okadu jokelu.. inkodlu counterlu..
okadu dedications .. inkodu emotionsu
okallu cheering.. inkodu flirting..
nuvvu raasey baa.. raayalsindhe anthe,,[img]http://gifs.gifbin.com/082010/1281970997_wake-up-call.gif[/img]
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Seethayya............Evadi Gola Vinadu,pattinchukodu

[Market Mastaan]

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Seethayya............Evadi Gola Vinadu,pattinchukodu
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[Ruler4Dmasses]

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Seethayya............Evadi Gola Vinadu,pattinchukodu
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nenu konni picchi picchivi raaasa... andullo few of my interests ni link pm sesings soosko...
inka other palces also tryied le kaani... I dont bother baa... kotthakotthagaa raayalanna thapana.. nerchukovalanna aasa.. Check PM link .nacchithe ok.. nacchakapothe thittukoku oknaa...
edho nerchukuntunna baaa
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[Ruler4Dmasses]

chinnadho. peddadho... neevu raayu padamula allika ..yettidho
cheppadalachu kunna bhaavalu ettivo..kotthavo paathavo..
goppollu rachiyinchiri kavithalanu.. vela vela varnaala gubhalimputho
aaa charitha lona daagi vunna saramaulu parikinchagaa thelsinu etuvantivo

chinninaati yandhu neevu palikina mugdha mohana raagamaaa
yukthavyasu nandhu bidiyapu logili lo suswaraala ragamaaa
padam padam nerchukonagaa.. jaanapadam avvagaaa
okkoridhi okko theeru .. saagenu daarulanni veruverugaa

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chinnadho. peddadho... neevu raayu padamula allika ..yettidho
cheppadalachu kunna bhaavalu ettivo..kotthavo paathavo..
goppollu rachiyinchiri kavithalanu.. vela vela varnaala gubhalimputho
aaa charitha lona daagi vunna saramaulu parikinchagaa thelsinu etuvantivo

chinninaati yandhu neevu palikina mugdha mohana raagamaaa
yukthavyasu nandhu bidiyapu logili lo suswaraala ragamaaa
padam padam nerchukonagaa.. jaanapadam avvagaaa
okkoridhi okko theeru .. saagenu daarulanni veruverugaa
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