"i Wish I Could Say" - Naa Rendo Attempt At Poetry- Feedback Again Pls

[Ruler4Dmasses]

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Nuvvuv raayi baa... I love to learn from all ..
first lo okkamukkaraadhu edho sinnaffudu paatha cinemaalu hollywood ammila celebs andaalu soosi varninchings thaffaa...
nemmadhi ehdo trying baa... kummu nuvvu[img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img][img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img][img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img][img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img]

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Nuvvuv raayi baa... I love to learn from all ..
first lo okkamukkaraadhu edho sinnaffudu paatha cinemaalu hollywood ammila celebs andaalu soosi varninchings thaffaa...
nemmadhi ehdo trying baa... kummu nuvvu[img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img][img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img][img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img][img]http://www.desigifs.com/sites/default/files/ntr-2.gif?1307568244[/img]
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try chestha baa