1234 Randolph St.....crime/psycho Thriller

[krisomania2043]

G pagala undi mastaru rayandi

[charygaru]

[quote name='Murthygaru' timestamp='1350397677' post='1302636018']
G pagala undi mastaru rayandi
[/quote]

veedu mana Junior gadu bay

P.S:-- aavesham ga coll peru eseyyaku andariki details bayata pettudu nachhadu

[krisomania2043]

[quote name='charygaru' timestamp='1350397761' post='1302636026']
veedu mana Junior gadu bay

P.S:-- aavesham ga coll peru eseyyaku andariki details bayata pettudu nachhadu
[/quote]
auna awesome kada
naaku nache genere idi thriller mastu ga rastunav bhayya continue sey emaindi

[charygaru]

[quote name='Murthygaru' timestamp='1350397918' post='1302636032']
auna awesome kada
naaku nache genere idi thriller mastu ga rastunav bhayya continue sey emaindi
[/quote]

veedidi oka ajeeb prablem ochhi start chesthunna ani antadu full giraki osthadi appudu cheppadu aa tarvatha andaru visigi poyi dengestharu appudu ochhi what re no encouragement antadu [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/2a8hrox.jpg[/img]

[Allpatchino]

okey inko 10 mins lo start chesthunna story ni coffee tesukoni vasthaa

[jbourne]

[quote name='Allpatchino' timestamp='1350398146' post='1302636041']
okey inko 10 mins lo start chesthunna story ni coffee tesukoni vasthaa
[/quote]

Alpatchino coffe with Varun estory kidar re

[Allpatchino]

[size=6][b]eppathi dhaka raasindhi viewers kosam [/b][/size]


[b]China, Leshan, [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]aney oka patnam lo jarigina yadartha gathaa...[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]adhivaram roju udhayam 04:30 am ki oka sandhu chivara chala kukkalu gumigodayeee... chetha dabba deggara cheri arusthooo unayyeee. okati kahdu rendu ekangaa oka 10 nundi 15 vedhi kukkalu oka sanchi kosam pota potiga arusthu kottladuthunayee....a arupulaku a vehdi lo undey janam antha lecharuuu enta godvaa ani....elukalu pandhi kokkulu kukkalu anni ehdo oka nalla ni sanchi ni peekuthu kottladukuntundhi gaminchadu a vedhi kurradu....[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]Bokkala kosma kotladey kukka notlo oka manishi cheyyi laga kanipichi anumanu vachi ventaney police laku phone chesadu akkada Night Watch man [/font][/color][b]Zxin huy [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]ventaney [policalaku firiyadhu chesadu....10 nimishalalo....city lo unna police lu antha ahdavidigaa akkadaku cheraru... a street ni block chesaru....sniffer dogs kuda digayee...appudappudey suryudu kastha podavatam modhalettadu...policelu taniki chesaru...a chetha dabbalo oka amamyee thala oka kalu vellu narikesina cheyyi kanipichayee....chala kirathakanga hatya chesaru...a dorikina mukkalaanu road mehda percharu....adarala kosma kani 30% matramey dorikindhi[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]janam gundelo gubulu..elantivi ventaney arikattali doshini patutkovali chala kachithanga cheppadu city comisisoner..dheniki ganu Zong lee ni special officer ga niyamincharu...Zong lee spot lo dorikina achukilatho thana investigation modhalu pettadu, forensic nipunulu pani lo nimagnulayyaru...[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]dorikina Thala, cheyyi..kani finger prints theesukoleni paristhithi...vellakunna charmani chekkesadu...[/font][/color][b]hanthakuda hanthakula? [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]chuttu pakka urulallo evaraina ada pillalu thappi poina caselu emaian register ayyayo lehdo telsukomanadu....rathri 8 aindhi....cigarette tgauthunna Lee ki phone vachindhi...[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]Garbage recycle center nundi call ..Lee okak saree ga shock thinnadu...venatney car lo akakdiki cherukunnadu...thala mondemu, kallu leni oka body adhi ada pilla dhi...dheniki mundhu roju dorikina vatiki sambhandam undi undahcu ani ventaney lab ki tharalincharu ...3 gantala patu parikshalu nirvahinchi nipunulu....thala body okari dey ani niradarincharu..kani a cheyyi dhi vatiki match kalehdu ani ananruuu. lee manasu lo bayam modhalu aindhi ..[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]finger prints tho aina chanipoindhi evaro gurthudham antey adhi lekund apoindhi ela ela nai baga teevranga alochisthunadu Lee ...Dr body and cheyyi edharu sumaur okatey age group vallu ainattu and okari chavu ki inkokari chavu oka 1hr sepu theda undachu ani nidrarincharu...kani ehdi pakkaga ledhu..[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]2 rojulu aian lee chethiki adharam ledhu, achuki ledhu kanisma chanipoindhi evaru anehdi kuda nirdarinchaleka poyadu...chuttu pakala pranthallo misisng cases ga namodhaian valla files tepichadu...kani a vaysu kalla varu evaru leru....3 roju..mahdyanam 12 gantalaku post man vachi oka dabba ichadu . open cheisna gaurd ki andhulo oka Botlte lo oka manishi gundey kanipichindhi...andhulo oka ammayee photo....[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]adi chosina ventaney Lee okka saree ga bigapatti upiri vadhiladu...athani lo ehdo telyani namma kam oka asha chigurinchindhi...I will kill you Bastard ani arisaduuu..[/font][/color]
[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]a phoot lo ammayi kosma inka galimpu start chesthadu...parents college frnds, relatives anni vaipula nundi investigation start[/font][/color]
[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]finally lee ki oka dari dorikindhi...a photo lo unna ammayee peru[/font][/color][b]Pauline leshan Normal Univ lo Accting Majors student [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]saturday nite party ki valal frnd tho kalisi vellinhdi ani valla colleege frnds chepparu...a frnd photo tho saha lab ki avchi Dr tho discuss chesina taruvatha a thala pauline dhi ani gurthincharu...a Gundey cheyyi okaridhey antey pauline fnrd ayyi undahcu nai conclusion ki vacharuuu[/font][/color]

[charygaru]

[quote name='Allpatchino' timestamp='1350398146' post='1302636041']
okey inko 10 mins lo start chesthunna story ni coffee tesukoni vasthaa
[/quote]

i dont believe you [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/2a8hrox.jpg[/img]

[Allpatchino]

Paulin , [b]siyun[/b] chirakla mithrulu..veri sneham chala pathadi univ lo veri gurinchi chala thakkuva mandhiki telsu...quiet ga silent ga veri lokham lo vveru undey vallu...edharu ACCT class students..


okari gurinchi inkokariki valla valla illalo kuda telsu veri sneham kastha kutumbha parichayam ga marindhi


LEE thaniki lo chala ashcharya karamaina nijalu bayataku vachayee....Pauline siyun sneham mathu lo manava viluvalanu marchipoyaru ani......



kani verini champalsina avasaram evariki vachindhi......

[jbourne]

[quote name='Allpatchino' timestamp='1350398847' post='1302636114']
Paulin , [b]siyun[/b] chirakla mithrulu..veri sneham chala pathadi univ lo veri gurinchi chala thakkuva mandhiki telsu...quiet ga silent ga veri lokham lo vveru undey vallu...edharu ACCT class students..


okari gurinchi inkokariki valla valla illalo kuda telsu veri sneham kastha kutumbha parichayam ga marindhi


LEE thaniki lo chala ashcharya karamaina nijalu bayataku vachayee....Pauline siyun sneham mathu lo manava viluvalanu marchipoyaru ani......



kani verini champalsina avasaram evariki vachindhi......
[/quote]
Ragahavan story shades vunnai

[charygaru]

[quote name='Allpatchino' timestamp='1350398847' post='1302636114']
Paulin , [b]siyun[/b] chirakla mithrulu..veri sneham chala pathadi univ lo veri gurinchi chala thakkuva mandhiki telsu...quiet ga silent ga veri lokham lo vveru undey vallu...edharu ACCT class students..


okari gurinchi inkokariki valla valla illalo kuda telsu veri sneham kastha kutumbha parichayam ga marindhi


LEE thaniki lo chala ashcharya karamaina nijalu bayataku vachayee....[size=5][b]Pauline siyun sneham mathu lo manava viluvalanu marchipoyaru ani[/b][/size]......



kani verini champalsina avasaram evariki vachindhi......
[/quote]

eedio unte PM PLS

[Allpatchino]

Lee ni kalavadaniki Univ kurradu okadu station deggara wait chetshuntadu ...lee thanaku dorikina adarala gurinchi alochisthu station ki cherukuntadu....a kurradi peru Jang.
jang a edharu mamayila classmate...eppati nundo Siyun antey prema
thana premanu enno sarlu cheppi chusadu kani siyun manasulo unnadi pauline ani grahincha leka poyadu..

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[quote name='Allpatchino' timestamp='1350398451' post='1302636063']
[size=6][b]eppathi dhaka raasindhi viewers kosam [/b][/size]


[b]China, Leshan, [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]aney oka patnam lo jarigina yadartha gathaa...[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]adhivaram roju udhayam 04:30 am ki oka sandhu chivara chala kukkalu gumigodayeee... chetha dabba deggara cheri arusthooo unayyeee. okati kahdu rendu ekangaa oka 10 nundi 15 vedhi kukkalu oka sanchi kosam pota potiga arusthu kottladuthunayee....a arupulaku a vehdi lo undey janam antha lecharuuu enta godvaa ani....elukalu pandhi kokkulu kukkalu anni ehdo oka nalla ni sanchi ni peekuthu kottladukuntundhi gaminchadu a vedhi kurradu....[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]Bokkala kosma kotladey kukka notlo oka manishi cheyyi laga kanipichi anumanu vachi ventaney police laku phone chesadu akkada Night Watch man [/font][/color][b]Zxin huy [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]ventaney [policalaku firiyadhu chesadu....10 nimishalalo....city lo unna police lu antha ahdavidigaa akkadaku cheraru... a street ni block chesaru....sniffer dogs kuda digayee...appudappudey suryudu kastha podavatam modhalettadu...policelu taniki chesaru...a chetha dabbalo oka amamyee thala oka kalu vellu narikesina cheyyi kanipichayee....chala kirathakanga hatya chesaru...a dorikina mukkalaanu road mehda percharu....adarala kosma kani 30% matramey dorikindhi[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]janam gundelo gubulu..elantivi ventaney arikattali doshini patutkovali chala kachithanga cheppadu city comisisoner..dheniki ganu Zong lee ni special officer ga niyamincharu...Zong lee spot lo dorikina achukilatho thana investigation modhalu pettadu, forensic nipunulu pani lo nimagnulayyaru...[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]dorikina Thala, cheyyi..kani finger prints theesukoleni paristhithi...vellakunna charmani chekkesadu...[/font][/color][b]hanthakuda hanthakula? [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]chuttu pakka urulallo evaraina ada pillalu thappi poina caselu emaian register ayyayo lehdo telsukomanadu....rathri 8 aindhi....cigarette tgauthunna Lee ki phone vachindhi...[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]Garbage recycle center nundi call ..Lee okak saree ga shock thinnadu...venatney car lo akakdiki cherukunnadu...thala mondemu, kallu leni oka body adhi ada pilla dhi...dheniki mundhu roju dorikina vatiki sambhandam undi undahcu ani ventaney lab ki tharalincharu ...3 gantala patu parikshalu nirvahinchi nipunulu....thala body okari dey ani niradarincharu..kani a cheyyi dhi vatiki match kalehdu ani ananruuu. lee manasu lo bayam modhalu aindhi ..[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]finger prints tho aina chanipoindhi evaro gurthudham antey adhi lekund apoindhi ela ela nai baga teevranga alochisthunadu Lee ...Dr body and cheyyi edharu sumaur okatey age group vallu ainattu and okari chavu ki inkokari chavu oka 1hr sepu theda undachu ani nidrarincharu...kani ehdi pakkaga ledhu..[/font][/color][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]2 rojulu aian lee chethiki adharam ledhu, achuki ledhu kanisma chanipoindhi evaru anehdi kuda nirdarinchaleka poyadu...chuttu pakala pranthallo misisng cases ga namodhaian valla files tepichadu...kani a vaysu kalla varu evaru leru....3 roju..mahdyanam 12 gantalaku post man vachi oka dabba ichadu . open cheisna gaurd ki andhulo oka Botlte lo oka manishi gundey kanipichindhi...andhulo oka ammayee photo....[/font][/color]

[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]adi chosina ventaney Lee okka saree ga bigapatti upiri vadhiladu...athani lo ehdo telyani namma kam oka asha chigurinchindhi...I will kill you Bastard ani arisaduuu..[/font][/color]
[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]a phoot lo ammayi kosma inka galimpu start chesthadu...parents college frnds, relatives anni vaipula nundi investigation start[/font][/color]
[color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]finally lee ki oka dari dorikindhi...a photo lo unna ammayee peru[/font][/color][b]Pauline leshan Normal Univ lo Accting Majors student [/b][color=#282828][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]saturday nite party ki valal frnd tho kalisi vellinhdi ani valla colleege frnds chepparu...a frnd photo tho saha lab ki avchi Dr tho discuss chesina taruvatha a thala pauline dhi ani gurthincharu...a Gundey cheyyi okaridhey antey pauline fnrd ayyi undahcu nai conclusion ki vacharuuu[/font][/color]
[/quote]
neeku manchi talent undi baa nuvvu kallaki kattinattu narrate chestav kakapote koncham redundancy untundi nee narration lo and sometimes too much unnecessary details istav for ex ee lines lo

[color=#ff0000]"[font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]adhivaram roju udhayam 04:30 am ki oka sandhu chivara chala kukkalu gumigodayeee... [/font][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]chetha dabba deggara cheri arusthooo unayyeee. okati kahdu rendu ekangaa oka 10 nundi 15 vedhi kukkalu oka sanchi kosam pota potiga arusthu kottladuthunayee"[/font][/color]

idi one line lo rayachu kani 2 lines rasav

[color=#ff0000]"[font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]chetha dabba deggara cheri arusthooo unayyeee. okati kahdu rendu ekangaa oka 10 nundi 15 vedhi kukkalu oka sanchi kosam pota potiga arusthu kottladuthunayee....a arupulaku a vehdi lo undey janam antha lecharuuu enta godvaa ani....elukalu pandhi kokkulu kukkalu anni ehdo oka nalla ni sanchi ni peekuthu kottladukuntundhi gaminchadu a vedhi kurradu...."[/font][/color]

oka sanchi gurinchi 2-3 times cheppav........naku writing skills nill so I might be wrong kani naku anipinchindi cheppanu cont... cont...

[Allpatchino]

[quote name='horizontallycut' timestamp='1350400470' post='1302636311']
neeku manchi talent undi baa nuvvu kallaki kattinattu narrate chestav kakapote koncham redundancy untundi nee narration lo and sometimes too much unnecessary details istav for ex ee lines lo

[color=#ff0000]"[font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]adhivaram roju udhayam 04:30 am ki oka sandhu chivara chala kukkalu gumigodayeee... [/font][font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]chetha dabba deggara cheri arusthooo unayyeee. okati kahdu rendu ekangaa oka 10 nundi 15 vedhi kukkalu oka sanchi kosam pota potiga arusthu kottladuthunayee"[/font][/color]

idi one line lo rayachu kani 2 lines rasav

[color=#ff0000]"[font=helvetica, arial, sans-serif]chetha dabba deggara cheri arusthooo unayyeee. okati kahdu rendu ekangaa oka 10 nundi 15 vedhi kukkalu oka sanchi kosam pota potiga arusthu kottladuthunayee....a arupulaku a vehdi lo undey janam antha lecharuuu enta godvaa ani....elukalu pandhi kokkulu kukkalu anni ehdo oka nalla ni sanchi ni peekuthu kottladukuntundhi gaminchadu a vedhi kurradu...."[/font][/color]

oka sanchi gurinchi 2-3 times cheppav........naku writing skills nill so I might be wrong kani naku anipinchindi cheppanu cont... cont...
[/quote]Proof reading ledhu kadha and edhi live composing ...so errors prevent cheyya lekapothunna

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[quote name='Allpatchino' timestamp='1350400583' post='1302636327']
Proof reading ledhu kadha and edhi live composing ...so errors prevent cheyya lekapothunna
[/quote]
ila live performance iche badulu munde story rasukoni post cheyyachu kada mama