Nee Kosam

[paampachak]

pilavakunda jeevitham loki vacchav

pilichina patiinchukoledu

kalavakunda anukshanam kavvinchav

kalisina karuninchaledu

muttukunte muduchukunnav

pattukunte jaripoyav

kattukuntanante kottinantha panichesav

nee madi samudram loki tongi chuste uppenatho bhayapedatav

keratalatho naa paadam tadipi chakkiliginthalu pettaav

ekkadaki vellipoyav

nannu enduku dooram chesav

nee padavula pai muddu pette kshanani enduku ranivvakunda chesav

nuvvu nijamo abaddhamo vetikina javabuni teliyanivvakunda

nireekshanalo enduku nannu nilipi vesav

devudu pampina devata va

vidhi nerpina paathaniva

prakruti chupinche maarpuva

evaru nuvvu ? nannu eppudu malli kalustavu ?

priya ! okka chiru saiga chalu

naa jeevitham lo noorellu ninu malli kalise aa okka kshanani ki ankitam ista

[galiraju]

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[Yuva Nataratna]

Awesome....

[mukunda]

[quote name='paampachak' timestamp='1382252960' post='1304441187']
pilavakunda jeevitham loki vacchav

pilichina patiinchukoledu

kalavakunda anukshanam kavvinchav

kalisina karuninchaledu

muttukunte muduchukunnav

pattukunte jaripoyav

kattukuntanante kottinantha panichesav

nee madi samudram loki tongi chuste uppenatho bhayapedatav

keratalatho naa paadam tadipi chakkiliginthalu pettaav

ekkadaki vellipoyav

nannu enduku dooram chesav

nee padavula pai muddu pette kshanani enduku ranivvakunda chesav

nuvvu nijamo abaddhamo vetikina javabuni teliyanivvakunda

nireekshanalo enduku nannu nilipi vesav

devudu pampina devata va

vidhi nerpina paathaniva

prakruti chupinche maarpuva

evaru nuvvu ? nannu eppudu malli kalustavu ?

priya ! okka chiru saiga chalu

naa jeevitham lo noorellu ninu malli kalise aa okka kshanani ki ankitam ista
[/quote]

eti idanta viswamitra kosame.......

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[sitaraZahir]

[quote name='paampachak' timestamp='1382252960' post='1304441187']
pilavakunda jeevitham loki vacchav

pilichina patiinchukoledu

kalavakunda anukshanam kavvinchav

kalisina karuninchaledu

muttukunte muduchukunnav

pattukunte jaripoyav

kattukuntanante kottinantha panichesav

nee madi samudram loki tongi chuste uppenatho bhayapedatav

keratalatho naa paadam tadipi chakkiliginthalu pettaav

ekkadaki vellipoyav

nannu enduku dooram chesav

nee padavula pai muddu pette kshanani enduku ranivvakunda chesav

nuvvu nijamo abaddhamo vetikina javabuni teliyanivvakunda

nireekshanalo enduku nannu nilipi vesav

devudu pampina devata va

vidhi nerpina paathaniva

prakruti chupinche maarpuva

evaru nuvvu ? nannu eppudu malli kalustavu ?

priya ! okka chiru saiga chalu

naa jeevitham lo noorellu ninu malli kalise aa okka kshanani ki ankitam ista
[/quote]

few lines r really good.. keep writing

[PichiPyune]

masthundiii pooo!

[madhu_]

idi mee story aa??... [size=4] [/size]

[@Shadow@]

Nice

[biscuitRAJA000]

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[Doola]

db lo poets ekkuvyy poyaraa or oka man ee anni ids ni nadipidtunaada

btw baaga raasav

[adorablegirl]

[size=4] really nice..[/size]

[shankyy]

very nice

[paampachak]

[quote name='madhu_' timestamp='1382271680' post='1304441385']
idi mee story aa??...
[/quote]

only 1st half

[pinky123]

superb

[rakshakudu]

GP