Oka Roju - A Horror Story

[ChampakDas]

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nenu kuda manchi deyyam script ready chesta  mayya ...lopala ideas tannukochestunnayi  ....  story line  .... 3 katti lanti tella fafalu india trip ki vastaru  ..akkada vallaki mani ani oka guide parichayam aitadu  ...   aa tarvata em jarugutundi ... ??? @3$%

 

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Friends,

 

now the STORY is over.

 

Mee feedback and suggestions cheppandi :) 

 

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[ChampakDas]

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Neha madhurima ni somehow oppinchi tana friend ni kaluddham ani cheppi Aanand saksena deggariki teesukeltundi.

 

Madhurima tho oka ganta sepu private gaa maatlaadaaka Aanand Neha tho ilaa antaadu.

 

"Nuvvu tanani ikkadiki teesukocchi chaala manchi pani chesaav."

Neha, " Asalu tana problem enti?"

Anand, "Vaalla parents."

Neha, " What? "

Anand, " Chinnappati nundi vaalla naanna gaaru enno rakaalu gaa vaalla mother ni himsinchaaru. That too for nothing. Pregnant gaa unna vaalla amma ni oka roju vaalla naanna boot tho kottaaru ani edusthoo cheppindi madhurima. Eee vishayam vaalla amme tanaki cheppindi ani kooda cheppindi.

 

So, ilaanti tandrini choosthoo dweshisthoo perigina madhurima ki abbayilante kooda entho kontha hatred undatam sahajam. Sariggaa ilaanti time lone college lo RAHUL andari kante different gaa kanipinchaadu tanaki. Appati nundi RAHUL ki sambandinchina prathee chinna vishayaanni observe cheyyatam start chesindi. Oka rakangaa cheppaalante RAHUL ni chaala LOVE chesindi. Aaradhinchindi kooda "

 

Neha, " Mari RAHUL ni anthalaa premisthe KAARTHEEK ni enduku pelli chesukundi?"

Aanand, " RAHUL gurinchi telisindhe kadaa.. Tanu baaga rich.Smart and sensitive kaavatam tho college lo ammayilu andaroo tana chuttoo chere vaallu.

Alaanti RAHUL ni premistunnaanu ani RAHUL ki kooda cheppakundaa mundu vaalla naanna ki cheppindi. Cheppagaane aayana koppaddadu. Artham chesukuntaadu anukundi. Kaanee, apaartham chesukunnadu."

 

Neha, " RAHUL gurinchi neekelaa telusu?"

Anand, " RAHUL okappudu naa patient. Ippudu chanipoyaadu le. Adhi vere vishayam anuko."

Neha, " Aithe....neeku rahul elaa chanipoyaado telusaa?"

Anand," Yaa....prastutam madhurima vaallu untunna 302 lone uresukuni chanipoyaadu. Nuvvu untunna 301 lo RAHUL preminchina ammaayi uresukuni chanipoyindi."

Neha, "Oh My GOD !!! City mottham vetiki maree ilaanti flats ni suggest chesinanduku KAARTHEEK ni enni thittinaa thappu ledu."

 

(.......to be continued)

 

[ChampakDas]

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Anand, " Neeku mundhe chebudaam anukunnanu. Anyhow, neekalaanti sentiments em levu kadaa ani cheppaledu.

Neha, " Saripoyindi le. Inthakee madhurima ki unna exact problem ento cheppaledu."

Anand," Psychosis and schizophrenia. But nothing to worry. Final stage ki vellentha bhayankaramaina condition lo ledu tanu. Endukante, tanaki kaartheek ante chaala ishtam. Evo konni vishayaallo RAHUL ni oohinchukuni compare chesukuni chusukuntondi. Anthe.

 

Infact, KAARTHEEK is a good husband.

Tanu maatlaadina ganta lo araganta kaartheek gurinche cheppindi."

 

Neha, "Mari RAHUL tanaki coffee kalipi table meeda pettadam......RAHUL tanatho maatladatam......Tanu maa intlo naa venaka RAHUL ni choodatam ivannee enti?"

Anand, "Schizophrenia lo AUDITORY and VISUAL hallucinations chaala common. Ante, oka daani gurinchi pade pade aalochisthoo unte after some point adhe kanipistundi. adhe vinipistundi kooda.

 

Madhurima case lo adhe jarigindi. Kaartheek tanaku rojuu premagaa coffee kalipi taaginchaali anukundi.But kaartheek alaa cheyyaledu.

Kaabatti RAHUL ni oohinchukundi.

 

RAHUL coffee kalipinattu, RAHUL maatladinattu oohinchukundi. RAHUL maatalu tanokkadaanike vinipistaayi.

Tane coffee kalupukuni table meeda petti......aa sangathe marichipoyi brush chesukovataaniki vellindi.

Appudu rahul maatladinattu oohinchukundi.

 

Asalu aa painting antha laa nacchataaniki kaaraname RAHUL.

Aa kallani ekkado choosinattu anipinchindi tanaki. Avi rahul kalle ani ventane gurtupattalekapoyindi.

Ilaa hallucination lo unnappudu gurtupattindi. 

 

Alaa painting lo unna RAHUL kalla mundu kanipinchesariki ekkadoo manasulo KAARTHEEK ni mosam chestunnaanu anna feeling kaligi 

parigetthukuntoo nee deggariki vacchindi. Nee room lo kooda same painting unna vishayam tanaki already telusu kaabatti, nee venaka RAHUL unnattu mallee tane oohinchukundi. Idanthaa hallucination. "

 

Neha, " Baabu aanand. Nannu bhayapettaku. Ippudu Madhurima tho maatladaali antene bhayangaa undi."

 

(......to be continued) 

 

[Nellore Pedda reddy]

Ending antha exciting ga ledu gani nuvvu cheppali anukunna point bagundi....overall ga nice :)

[ChampakDas]

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Neha, " Baabu aanand. Nannu bhayapettaku. Ippudu Madhurima tho maatladaali antene bhayangaa undi."

 

(......to be continued) 

 

[Avataar]

em jarugutundi...amir khan vachi incredible india ad vastundi respect foreigners ani @3$% @3$%

 

 

anadam @3$%

 

 

coffee kuda kalipistundi...rangu ruchi chikadanam @3$%

 

oho ikkadunnava ...

[Hyderabad_Nawab]

Friends,

 

now the STORY is over.

 

Mee feedback and suggestions cheppandi :)

 

Chadivi Septha...Intha Sadavaali Ante Tym Padtadhi...

[ChampakDas]

inka oka 20 pages rastavu emo anukunna :(  nuve rasava? nee narration bagundi 1st post lo highlight chesina 2 connecting line highlight

Anand, " Hahahah....Madhurima ante enduku bhayam neeku?"

 

Neha," Generally, nenu KAARTHEEK tho konchem close gaa move avutaanu le. Ippudu tana oohalloo nannu champesindi anuko.... Oohallo enti? nenu nijame kadaa...Nijangaane nannu champindi anuko.....Naa paristhiti enti?"

 

Anand, " Antha ledu le. Nee meeda manchi opinion ae undi tanaku. Emante kaartheek tirigocche lopu tanani careful gaa choosukovali"

 

Neha, "Tanu maa intlone undelaa nenu choosukuntaa. I'll take care."

 

Alaa aa OKKA ROJU nee bhayapaduthoo bhayaanni telikundaa cover chesukuntoo madhurima tho gadipindhi Neha.

 

Aa roju raatri MISSAMMA cinema choosthu disturbance lo nundi kontha bayatiki raavataniki try chesindi Madhurima.

 

Rendu rojullo KAARTHEEK vacchesadu. Vacchee raagane Neha jarigindhaantha cheppesindi.

Aa roju saayantram aanand ni kalisi jarigindanthaa telusukunnaadu.

 

Madhurima ki kaavalsindhi nijamayina prema ane vishayam artham ayyindi kaartheek ki.

Ventane tana paddhathinee, intinee renditinee maarchesaadu. Konchem dooram ayinaa sare, intaka mundu laa oori chivara kaakundaa center lo illu teesukunnaadu.

 

Alaane neha ki kooda pakkane manchi flat vetiki pettaadu.

Madhurima ki jarigina ee incident tho loneliness anedhi manasuni entha effect chestundo telusukunna Neha vaalla parents ki call chesi sambandhaalu choodandi ani cheppindi. Marriage value telusukunnanduku vaalla parents happy gaa feel ayyaaru.

 

Motthaaniki oka OOHA anedhi jeevitam lo inni OOHINCHANI maarpulu teesukostundani bahusaa madhurima kooda OOHINCHI undadhu :)

 

Prathee manishikee konni OOHALU .....konni KALALU untaayi

 

OOHA ante kalla mundu jarugutunnatlu manam kane KALA

KALA ante kallu moosukunnappudu kane OOHA. 

Anthe thedaa.

 

Adhi kala ainaa, ooha ainaa puttedhi mana nunde.

Kaabatti, entha bore kottina manchi aalochanale cheyyandi. Entha oorinchinaa chedu aalochanalu oohinchakandi.

 

Jeevitaanni jeevinchatam lone majaa untundi kaanee, oohinchatam lo kaadu.

Oohallo batakatam modalu pedithe jeevinchatam kashtam avutundi,

 

Daanni example gaa teesukune ee MADHURIMA character sketch geesi

OKA ROJU raayatam venaka unna main reason 

 

THE END 

 

[ChampakDas]

I love stories :) good narration saduvu

oho ikkadunnava ...

 

[ChanduTRIVIKRAM]

Ending antha exciting ga ledu gani nuvvu cheppali anukunna point bagundi....overall ga nice 

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[ChampakDas]

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[Avataar]

I love stories :) good narration saduvu

 

naughty naaraayan...update avvu...

[ChanduTRIVIKRAM]

I love stories :) good narration saduvu

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[Avataar]

 

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