Not a Regular Short Film

[Sweetmemory]

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Feedback whether it is good or bad will help us to grow as filmmakers, please post your feedback

[TampaChinnodu]

2 hours ago, Sweetmemory said:

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ammayee appi anna short movie lo heroine kada ?

[iddaritho]

1 hour ago, Sweetmemory said:

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over all ga 20 min time waste anipinchindi ,

very bad , overacting from the lead actors , underacting from the side character 

over all very bad , 

And two suggestions 

 

2) Hugging kuda theyyatam rakunda ela thesuthunnavu short film 

1) If you want your heroine to expose her legs , get some one with toned legs, don't need to be white , but need to be toned 

 

[cyndrilla]

5 hours ago, Sweetmemory said:

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Concept bavundhi...touching ga undhi...

[cyndrilla]

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[kittaya]

7 hours ago, Sweetmemory said:

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ok for me... kani papa tho over acting anipinchindhi... story is good.... depression lo vellethappudu female actor inka konchm reaction tagginchi... isthe bagundedhi aemo anipinchindhi.... 

 

Story  ki matram very good.... 

satires anni ok

acting bad(ofcourse manam aemi professional kaadu kada... dont take negative)

cinematography ok

direction is ok 

 

[Sweetmemory]

Thanks for the feedback guys

[icecreamZ]

 -1 / 5

 

first shot framing nerchuko - first opening scene eh pedha blunder. read about rule of thirds and symmetric framing. btw, konni shots bagane vachayi during the dinner.

editing 0. shots eppudu ela cut cheyyalo nerchuko. how to maintain continuity and minimize jerk.

 

story / dialogue / acting : - 1 / 5 

 

atleast try chesinandhuku na abhinandhanalu.

 

 

[Sweetmemory]

Thanks bro

[MrDexter]

Thread title is misleading.........

Its a very regular and routine telugu shortfilm....