Konebhar6 Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 2 hours ago, FrustratedVuncle said: Anna 3 pages opikaga chadiva still no machala. Writer ni marchu anna, em explain cheyalo telika pichikari chesi 10gadu story mottam. ante ee madhya @kevinUsa movie sequels ki alavatu padi, ila drag chestu rastunnadu .. 5 pages lagadu ... 15 pages target anta... Quote
american_desi Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 14 hours ago, kevinUsa said: Tuesday Afternoon – Breaking In Morning wife ni casual ga follow ayya. Office ki vellindi as usual. Same car route, same building lo enter ayindhi. Work place lo secure ga settle ayyaka, nenu immediate ga back turn ayyi apartment side ki ochesa. Apartment building daggara reach ayyaka, na heart pounding start. Car park lo wife car ledu. Confirm — inside ledu. Time only 10:15 AM. Work lo untundi, so at least 6–7 hours free untayi. This was my chance. Entrance door normal ga open chesa, like resident laga act chesa. Konni tenants kuda veltu vacharu, nenu head down ga phone lo busy act chesa. 304 door reach ayyaka stop ayya. Lock check chesa — obviously locked. Normal people ki end card. But balcony window memory flash ayindhi. Ninna night kanipinchindi koncham open ventilation ki. Building back side ki round ayyi fire escape climb chesa. Each step lo steel creak sound echo ayindhi, mind lo fear — evaraina kanipistara? Na palms sweat ayayi, but grip tight ga hold chesa. Third floor reach ayyaka window visible. Small crack, half-inch open. Paper or knife tip petti wider cheyyachu. Luck or their stupidity — ventilation kosam but na chance. Penknife nunchi blade extend chesi careful ga press chesa, window slowly wide avvadaniki start ayindhi. Inside curtain half drawn ga undhi, light dim. One deep breath teesukoni, nenu inside slip ayya. Feet ground touch ayyaka silence heavy ga feel ayindhi. Nenu burglar laaga act chestunna ani sudden realization — kani reason justified. Inside room smell different — mix of perfume and men’s deodorant. Closet open chesa. Wife dresses neatly arranged, but pakkane men’s shirts, trousers folded. Her world and his world blend ayi one closet lo. Bedside nightstand lo oka photo. Printed frame — wife and Alex smiling, arms around each other at some party. Same party friends circle lo anni photos naku share cheppindhi before. Nenu okka outsider laga feel ayya. Kitchen counter lo notepad. Scribbles clear: “Beach weekend—finally alone after?” Maro line lo random doodles and timings. Next to that receipts stack — hotel names, dinner bills, coffee shops. Dates 2–3 months back. Truth hit like truck. This was not new. This was going on from long. Na hands shake ayayi. Rage immediate ga peak ki vellaalani try chesindi. But survival instinct calm cheyyadam start chesindi. Screaming now waste. Need evidence. Need proof. Bag nunchi cheap Wi-Fi cam remove chesa. Pen drive size small, lens tiny. Bookshelf backside lo fix chesa, power connect direct ga plug point lo. App link connect chesi test chesa — yes, feed clear visible mobile lo. Heart beat fast, but satisfaction feel — now truth will reveal itself. Immediately fire escape nunchi same way bayata ochesa. Each step down lo, mind lo one line echo: “Game over soon.” Wi-Fi password ela dorikindi? 1 Quote
psycopk Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 1 hour ago, american_desi said: Wi-Fi password ela dorikindi? Dani phone lo maps nundi address tesinatu wifi ki velli known networks passwords kuda copy chesukunadu… 1 1 Quote
bulreddy Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 36 minutes ago, psycopk said: Dani phone lo maps nundi address tesinatu wifi ki velli known networks passwords kuda copy chesukunadu… neeku chala intresting ga vunnattu vundi story. Quote
bulreddy Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 36 minutes ago, psycopk said: Dani phone lo maps nundi address tesinatu wifi ki velli known networks passwords kuda copy chesukunadu… taata eppudanna nenu Austin ki vaste kalustava? Quote
kevinUsa Posted October 1 Author Report Posted October 1 1 hour ago, american_desi said: Wi-Fi password ela dorikindi? Edi Telugu I story no logic only magic 1 Quote
psycopk Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 11 minutes ago, bulreddy said: taata eppudanna nenu Austin ki vaste kalustava? kastam... 1 Quote
Wrangler Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 Adento ilanti stories lo bale timing lo romance untadi normal couples life lo ilanti romandu undadu 2 Quote
Popular Post Bhagath_Singh Posted October 1 Popular Post Report Posted October 1 Husband gaadi narration tho ardam avtundi…Wife vaadni enduku boring annindo.. Writer Narration lo anavasaramina details ekkuva unnay… small mistakes correct cheskovali amma…Husband camera second day pettadu Alex and wife already one day spend chesaru…malli Husband gone anna question wife tho enduku adugutadu ra….chinna chinna logics miss avvodu next time … 1 5 Quote
psycopk Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 37 minutes ago, kevinUsa said: Edi Telugu I story no logic only magic Climax matram ee scene veyi uncle https://www.instagram.com/reel/DPNYVTMkg64/?igsh=MXJ6MHF6eGc2c3puMw== Quote
kevinUsa Posted October 1 Author Report Posted October 1 1 minute ago, psycopk said: Climax matram ee scene veyi uncle https://www.instagram.com/reel/DPNYVTMkg64/?igsh=MXJ6MHF6eGc2c3puMw== Kadu Anna am looking at various scenarios Quote
Bhagath_Singh Posted October 1 Report Posted October 1 2 hours ago, psycopk said: Dani phone lo maps nundi address tesinatu wifi ki velli known networks passwords kuda copy chesukunadu… ee Story Ki Co-editor aa, DB lo bothiga scripts lo Creativity taggipoyindi.... Quote
Popular Post psycopk Posted October 1 Popular Post Report Posted October 1 7 minutes ago, Bhagath_Singh said: ee Story Ki Co-editor aa, DB lo bothiga scripts lo Creativity taggipoyindi.... 3 Quote
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