story writing suggestion...

[dasari4kntr]

in one of my story.... there is "aatma"...only hero see that "aatma" others cant see....

actually...i wrote it like "aatma" is some kind of astral plane...and hero is in "physical realm"...

so...how can i justify that...hero only…seeing that aatma...but not others...?

 

little background about the story…

 

[Amy99]

Hey idhi old story madhyalo apesav adhe  na? Edho okati rasi... Apogettey, bagundhi story. 

[LuckyCharm]

@dasari4kntr

Describe your Hero

Danni batti will suggest.

what's his background?

Is he more musculine or feminine?

[dasari4kntr]

2 minutes ago, LuckyCharm said:

@dasari4kntr

Describe your Hero

Danni batti will suggest.

what's his background?

Is he more musculine or feminine?

he is normal...person..

..love failure..depressed...software engineer...who came to USA in early 1990s...

[dasari4kntr]

4 minutes ago, LuckyCharm said:

@dasari4kntr

Describe your Hero

Danni batti will suggest.

what's his background?

Is he more musculine or feminine?

 

1 minute ago, dasari4kntr said:

he is normal...person..

..love failure..depressed...software engineer...who came to USA in early 1990s...

and also..attempted suicide multiple times...

check the link in first post....

[LuckyCharm]

3 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

he is normal...person..

..love failure..depressed...software engineer...who came to USA in early 1990s...

what is the background of the ghost? 

You can make him an empath and a sensitive character.

He had it rough. So this makes him more receptive to other people's emotions.

You can also include near death experience of your Hero.

What went through this head at that time and whose pictures flashed in his head and the black out.

So he is the chosen one by the ghost may be.

[dasari4kntr]

1 minute ago, LuckyCharm said:

what is the background of the ghost? 

You can make him an empath and a sensitive character.

He had it rough. So this makes him more receptive to other people's emotions.

So he is the chosen one by the ghost may be.

bhakground of the ghost/aatma is positive...

she helps hero...not getting murdered by another gang...

in one point...hero also enters into the astral plan...and will talk to ghost/aatma...to know the her background...and gang background...

[LuckyCharm]

Just now, dasari4kntr said:

bhakground of the ghost/aatma is positive...

she helps hero...not getting murdered by another gang...

in one point...hero also enters into the astral plan...and will talk to ghost/aatma...to know the her background...and gang background...

So you already established the connection.

May be I didn't understand your question.

[dasari4kntr]

Just now, LuckyCharm said:

So you already established the connection.

May be I didn't understand your question.

he enter into astral plan later...

...but initially..he sees the ghost while he is in physical realm...but others cant see her...

my question is how we can justificy....physical relam person can see astral plan ghost/aatma...?

[kalaa_pipaasi]

34 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

in one of my story.... there is "aatma"...only hero see that "aatma" others cant see....

actually...i wrote it like "aatma" is some kind of astral plane...and hero is in "physical realm"...

so...how can i justify that...hero only…seeing that aatma...but not others...?

 

little background about the story…

 

May be you don’t have to justify it.give an example at some point in the story telling that hero alone can see it and ppl around him can’t.make the audience think that it is that way right from beginning

[LuckyCharm]

5 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

he enter into astral plan later...

...but initially..he sees the ghost while he is in physical realm...but others cant see her...

my question is how we can justificy....physical relam person can see astral plan ghost/aatma...?

Say he is extra receptive anthe

[dasari4kntr]

Just now, kalaa_pipaasi said:

May be you don’t have to justify it.give an example at some point in the story telling that hero alone can see it and ppl around him can’t.make the audience think that it is that way right from begenning

hmm..ok...

i was reading...astral plane concepts....for proper justifiable writing...

[Battu123]

SahitiD ki kasta training ivvu 

[dasari4kntr]

1 minute ago, LuckyCharm said:

Say he is extra receptive anthe

hmm...thanks..

i will study about..this...

[kalaa_pipaasi]

Just now, dasari4kntr said:

hmm..ok...

i was reading...astral plane concepts....for proper justifiable writing...

Give ur audience more rational thinking and they will ask you more.if you are up to the game, then u need to do more thinking on ur story line and characters.few concepts can be started with establishing things the way they are