story writing suggestion...

[LuckyCharm]

2 minutes ago, kalaa_pipaasi said:

Give ur audience more rational thinking and they will ask you more.if you are up to the game, then u need to do more thinking on ur story line and characters.few concepts can be started with establishing things the way they are

I agree with this @dasari4kntr.

Leave it mysterious. If everything is put out there it gets boring.

Story needs to be intriguing.

[dasari4kntr]

17 minutes ago, LuckyCharm said:

what is the background of the ghost? 

You can make him an empath and a sensitive character.

He had it rough. So this makes him more receptive to other people's emotions.

You can also include near death experience of your Hero.

What went through this head at that time and whose pictures flashed in his head and the black out.

So he is the chosen one by the ghost may be.

i miss this point...earlier...

yes...that is one thing...i am thinking...

 

[Amy99]

25 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

he enter into astral plan later...

...but initially..he sees the ghost while he is in physical realm...but others cant see her...

my question is how we can justificy....physical relam person can see astral plan ghost/aatma...?

Story ki justification avasarama? Edho okati rasi padey... Chadivi pedatham. 

[dasari4kntr]

Just now, Amy99 said:

Story ki justification avasarama? Edho okati rasi padey... Chadivi pedatham. 

This story is getting big…like i almost wrote 50+ pages…and lot left to write…

i am not posting here…further parts…i have different plans with this story…

btw…i think you didnt read this story…you might be confusing with other one…

link is in first post…check..is this the one you are referring… 

 

[Amy99]

3 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

This story is getting big…like i almost wrote 50+ pages…and lot left to write…

i am not posting here…further parts…i have different plans with this story…

btw…i think you didnt read this story…you might be confusing with other one…

link is in first post…check..is this the one you are referring… 

 

Let me check it.

[ranku_mogudu]

2 hours ago, dasari4kntr said:

This story is getting big…like i almost wrote 50+ pages…and lot left to write…

i am not posting here…further parts…i have different plans with this story…

btw…i think you didnt read this story…you might be confusing with other one…

link is in first post…check..is this the one you are referring… 

 

Deyyam annaka astral plane ani science include cheyyodhu.. let audience read it as deyyam and it gives thrill and goose bumps.

 

Dont try to be Sukumar..Be Kodi Rama krishna bruh

[dasari4kntr]

Just now, ranku_mogudu said:

Deyyam annaka astral plane ani science include cheyyodhu.. let audience read it as deyyam and it gives thrill and goose bumps.

 

Dont try to be Sukumar..Be Kodi Rama krishna bruh

actually...twist is...deyyam is not really a deyyam...

its kidnapped...coma patient..her concious is in astrol plane...helping hero to survive and looking heros help later...

[ranku_mogudu]

16 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

actually...twist is...deyyam is not really a deyyam...

its kidnapped...coma patient..her concious is in astrol plane...helping hero to survive and looking heros help later...

appudu enduku antey premanta( Ram, Thamannah) story aipodhi kadha bro

[dasari4kntr]

6 minutes ago, ranku_mogudu said:

appudu enduku antey premanta( Ram, Thamannah) story aipodhi kadha bro

ado cinema vundaa...?

 

let me check...

[dasari4kntr]

11 minutes ago, ranku_mogudu said:

appudu enduku antey premanta( Ram, Thamannah) story aipodhi kadha bro

hmm..yaa...looks like similar concept...

Sravanthi and Ram both want to leave for India. Ram gets his passport by bluffing Sravanthi's father. However, at the airport, he is not able to find Sravanthi and leaves for India alone. After reaching India, he finds Sravanthi to his surprise at the airport. She tells him to meet a specific doctor in a specific hospital and disappears. On meeting the doctor, he finds Sravanthi in the hospital ICU. Sravanthi reveals that Ram has been talking to her soul. She went into a coma after an accident, which was a part of conspiracy hatched by DK and his agent in India, Koka Bhai (Kona Venkat). Only Ram can see and hear her, owing to their previous lives.

[dasari4kntr]

will change the narration...

@ranku_mogudu thanks..

[ranku_mogudu]

10 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

hmm..yaa...looks like similar concept...

Sravanthi and Ram both want to leave for India. Ram gets his passport by bluffing Sravanthi's father. However, at the airport, he is not able to find Sravanthi and leaves for India alone. After reaching India, he finds Sravanthi to his surprise at the airport. She tells him to meet a specific doctor in a specific hospital and disappears. On meeting the doctor, he finds Sravanthi in the hospital ICU. Sravanthi reveals that Ram has been talking to her soul. She went into a coma after an accident, which was a part of conspiracy hatched by DK and his agent in India, Koka Bhai (Kona Venkat). Only Ram can see and hear her, owing to their previous lives.

not to disappoint you. even Kona uncle wrote this story/Idea in Vegas based on some US Article on internet

 

but narration bagundhi nee story lo..keep the flow flowing..climax appudu kanna post climax lo reveal chesthey aipothundhi... like how Urmila is revealed in Kaun..

[ranku_mogudu]

6 minutes ago, dasari4kntr said:

will change the narration...

@ranku_mogudu thanks..

its a very good read bro  Keep doing this great work and always happy to help your enthusiasm

[TOM_BHAYYA]

4 hours ago, dasari4kntr said:

he is normal...person..

..love failure..depressed...software engineer...who came to USA in early 1990s...

That is @k2s 😳

[ranku_mogudu]

10 minutes ago, TOM_BHAYYA said:

That is @k2s 😳

@lbs taatha anukunna.. 80's lo ochaadantava @TOM_BHAYYA