obulesh Posted October 11, 2014 Author Report Posted October 11, 2014 Mari audience lekunda estory chepte bore kotting vayyaaa.... Kondaru audience vachaka istart chesta.. Elopu coming papa4, papa5 lo elanti narration expect chestunnaru? oka 5 ppl chappandi... Story narration ekkada improve cheyochu?? Story ni marchanu... narration ni marusta if needed.
obulesh Posted October 11, 2014 Author Report Posted October 11, 2014 Add psycosism and male domination okay papa4 lo undi male domination..
areybokka Posted October 11, 2014 Report Posted October 11, 2014 nuvvu correct flow lo ne unav... nuvu nee flow tho continue aipo
Bairagi From Bapatla Posted October 11, 2014 Report Posted October 11, 2014 narration lo in detail romance kavali... kaamam paravallu tokkali...
obulesh Posted October 11, 2014 Author Report Posted October 11, 2014 nuvvu correct flow lo ne unav... nuvu nee flow tho continue aipo Gatle vayya
obulesh Posted October 11, 2014 Author Report Posted October 11, 2014 narration lo in detail romance kavali... kaamam paravallu tokkali... papa4 lo masala narration penchuta... thamullu paruvallu tokkutaru.
areybokka Posted October 11, 2014 Report Posted October 11, 2014 bhaiyya story lo konchem emotion aney saltu, romance aney sweetu ni konchem penchu nee narration lo, okkokkadiki kaaripovali sagam chadivelopu
obulesh Posted October 11, 2014 Author Report Posted October 11, 2014 bhaiyya story lo konchem emotion aney saltu, romance aney sweetu ni konchem penchu nee narration lo, okkokkadiki kaaripovali sagam chadivelopu alage raaaja
TrishaManiac Posted October 11, 2014 Report Posted October 11, 2014 orey thondaragaa esi chaavaraa obulesuuuu....pattukuni kurchunnaaa....
obulesh Posted October 11, 2014 Author Report Posted October 11, 2014 Inko iddari views kosam waiting myannn.. Story narration ekkada improve cheyochu?? Story ni marchanu... narration ni marusta if needed.
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