Prema - My First Short Love Story :)

[dreamgirl]

Prema is looking at her watch for the 100th time. She is standing on the Mumbai Railway Platform, her eyes fixed to the direction where train is expected to come. She saw love birds flying freely in air, pema turned back to see her loving, caring husband steve busy in pampering their only 5 year old krithika, at a glance he looked like a perfect husband and father to her. The train going to Bangalore arrived, her legs voluntarily moved towards train, followed her by steve and krithika. She got in to there reserved compartment, adjusting their luggage under seats and made themselves comfortable. The train started its Journey to banglore. Krithika fell asleep in steve’s lap, when train started to pick up the miles.

Prema looked in to steve´s eyes in an appreciating manner, steve smiled at her, his eyes spoke saying’ I’M WITH YOU´´ and later he fell asleep. Prema looked at krithika and remembered the moments she was sleeping in her father´s lap. FATHER!! Prema´s heart picked up fastly with the speed of the wheels of train, Yeah after 5 years she is going to see him. Raamaanuja a Vaishnavite very strict devotee of lord vishnu. He is from a poor family, dedicated his life as a priest in temple serving lord vishnu. Meenakshi is his faithful wife and followed his steps. Raamaanuja´s only child is prema, he raised her traditionally pertaining in his caste, sent her to school, then college. He is a successful father raising prema in to a smart and educated girl in his community. His heart and soul is prema. One day arrived Steve In her life, a Christian who is also studying in same class..Steve got attracted to prema´s simple and natural Beauty and one fine day he dared talking to her by asking economics notes. Prema liked his politeness and gave her notes..On the second day steve returned book to prema, slowly they started to talk about subjects and continued to exchange their thoughts. By the end of their graduation they found their relation to be very compatible with each other and both are on ninth cloud for turning their friendship in to love. Prema´s cousin who is also studying in the same college came to know about prema and steve love affair. He informed to his uncle Raamaanuja. While prema was entering in to house, she noticed the silence. Raamaanuja called prema and asked about the steve and her relationship, and started to explain about difference in caste, culture, habits and traditions and warned her to stop talking to steve. She is standing in front of Raamaanuja as a criminal and couldn´t look straight in to her father´s eye and did not dared to talk. Meenakshi working inside the house came running by the voice of Raamaanuja and after listening to everything she couldn’t utter a single word against her husband. From the next day prema was not allowed to college or even to step out of the house. She was crying continuosly, unable to choose the most important man in her life. One fine morning she got a chance to meet steve and cried like a baby. Steve asked prema, whether she is ready to marry him? Prema is in dilemma for some time, gathered her whole courage and decided that her future man is steve and said YES to him and they both got married. After listening about prema’s marriage with steve raamaanuja couldn´t withstand the insult in the society, laterhe didn´t allow her daughter to have his blessings.

Prema and steve after marriage went to Mumbai and settled in single room with the help of friends. Couple of months it was a heaven for both of them but as started to clouds pass,they became pennyless and steve started to hunt for job. Steve got a small job and prema took tuitions to children. With in a year they were blessed with Krithika and happiness blossomed in their house. Steve was appreciated in his work and promoted to manager in a reputed company. Prema tried to call her Parents but no one answered after listening her voice. Prema could not withstand herself to see her parents for so many long years.Steve understood her and thought that elders might have changed their mind by now, started their journey to Bangalore.
With krithika´s touch prema came to the practical world , when she asked for water. she smiled and hugged her.The expected destination has arrived, they got down from train, took a cab and stopped in front of raamaanuja´s house. Prema was overwhelmed by seeing her house and when she was stepping towards her heartbeat raised, stomach muscles started contracting, eyes were searching for someone. By listening to the cab sound prema´s mother meenakshi came out and saw prema, steve and krithika. She signed calmly in to the house and prema followed her. Meenakshi took them to raamaanuja, who was lying on the bed for the last five years

Raamaanuja’s both legs and mouth were paralyzed and realized it was just few days after she left home. He is like a dead person now, ramaanuja´s eyes questioned her “” you insulted me in front of our community for your love, left me alone, broke my love and trust, you were unable to speak a single word in front of me about love but u dared to elope??”” She felt shameless and cried like a baby. After ten minutes, she felt his hand was moving on her head. She raised her head "YEAH IT´S HIM". She could see the love in his eyes, his stone heart melted like an iceberg by seeing with Steve and Krithika. She went near to raamanuja´s feet, washed them with her tears....

“”At Last Prema (LOVE,AFFECTION,ATTACHMENT) has won its owes between a father and daughter. May be the elder´s are angry on us for the things we do and show their hatred and unwillingness towards us, but I think it’s for a little while. Because their precious love is always awaiting for us... “”

“The love of a family is life's greatest blessing”

-DREAMGIRL

[chowdary9]

ok

[dreamgirl]

[quote name='Hangover' timestamp='1319506035' post='3028002']
ok
[/quote]

Ok, yenty chadhuvu..chaala kashtapadi raasaanu..long back

dg..

[PMREDDY19]

last few lines chadivaanu.. good Happy Ending...

for Prema( The Character)..

[chowdary9]

[quote name='dreamgirl' timestamp='1319506121' post='3028006']

Ok, yenty chadhuvu..chaala kashtapadi raasaanu..long back

dg..
[/quote]

nenu longback ee chadiva

[dreamgirl]

[quote name='PMR aka OM' timestamp='1319506121' post='3028007']
last few lines chadivaanu.. good Happy Ending...

for Prema( The Character)..
[/quote]

hmmmmmm..I know it's big long..anyways thanks

dg..

[dreamgirl]

[quote name='Hangover' timestamp='1319506158' post='3028012']

nenu longback ee chadiva
[/quote]

lazy bum

dg..

[gnr]

[dreamgirl]

Idhi chaala routine story, ippatiki vandha chuusaamu chadhivaamu anukunta..but somehow naakendhuko ee topic meedhe raayaalanipinchindhi naa first story

dg..

[chowdary9]

[quote name='dreamgirl' timestamp='1319506195' post='3028015']

lazy bum

dg..
[/quote]

sexy chick

dghang..

[gnr]

nuvvu raasaava aunty

[psycopk]

story in two lines.. oka ammai oka abbai ni love chesindi.. ammai valla intlo strict.. anduku aa ammai jump... 5years tarwata vastundi.. intlo vallu kshamincharu...

[dreamgirl]

[quote name='gnr' timestamp='1319506360' post='3028024']
nuvvu raasaava aunty
[/quote]

avunu uncle

dg..

[gnr]

[quote name='dreamgirl' timestamp='1319506439' post='3028028']

avunu uncle

dg..
[/quote]

nenu just 22 aunty... youth ikkada

[PMREDDY19]

[quote name='dreamgirl' timestamp='1319506255' post='3028018']
Idhi chaala routine story, ippatiki vandha chuusaamu chadhivaamu anukunta..but somehow naakendhuko ee topic meedhe raayaalanipinchindhi naa first story

dg..
[/quote]

well baaga pindaavugaa madyaalo story line ni... .